Series: The Fallen #2
Publication date: April 29th, 2021
Pages: 320
Pages: 320
Spice: 🌶️🌶️🌶️
DNF Percentage: 60% (page 180)
Synopsis:
The Fallen
Fierce. Feared. Always revered.
Five guys on a mission to tear me to the ground.
Three guys I can't escape--they make my heart pound.
I'm a moth to a flame of their white-hot fire.
But they're divided by secrets, lies, and raging desire.
Our paths are crossed. Our fate is sealed.
Our gaping wounds are yet to be healed.
Even as they try to break me, I won't give in.
So in the end, will the truth come out, or will lies win?



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Review:
I feel that I gave the series a fair shake. Even when I contemplating DNFing the first book I carried on. I don't entirely regret my decision because there were some interesting parts within the story, but the overwhelming cringe of the series won out in the end. I couldn't find any sort of connection with any of the male leads. I felt like they were all unworthy of the female main character and the reason for their animosity seemed paper thin. It felt like the author needed a hook for the reason behind the bullying and it was gasping at straws. All the evidence Zeph needed to prove that Blake wasn't behind the mysterious text messages should have been realized when he received a text at the exact time he was sitting in the hall of the dorm talking to her. At that point the bullying should have come to end and yet it only got worse and worse as time went on. I also couldn't understand why Blake kept giving them a pass on the things they did to her. They would hurt her and humiliate her so she would declare she was done with them and never wanted to see them again, only to then bump into them and immediately fall into bed with them. None of that made any sense and I like my books to at least be a little logical.
In the second book of the series we delve a little deeper into the backstory of Zeph's sister as well as Blake's mom mysteriously disappearing. The final straw for me came in the event that Blake had a dream that completely depicted a scene that would explain everything as to why her mother up and disappeared on her without a trace. But this was never talked about until at 60% of the second book? Add to that the fact that one of the guys who was seemingly all over her suddenly decides to hook up with one of catty women who are also trying to run her out of the school? Nah. No thanks.
This series felt very pieced together and trying to adhere to a genre that the author may not be completely comfortable with or experienced in. I could be wrong but that was the general vibe. There wasn't enough balance between the good and the bad to make it seem like any of the men are redeemable or that the female protagonist is any different than her mother who was also being abused before her disappearance. I wanted to like the series, and I gave it the best I could but, I had to cut my losses. It wasn't for me. But, give it a read and see if you feel differently.
In the second book of the series we delve a little deeper into the backstory of Zeph's sister as well as Blake's mom mysteriously disappearing. The final straw for me came in the event that Blake had a dream that completely depicted a scene that would explain everything as to why her mother up and disappeared on her without a trace. But this was never talked about until at 60% of the second book? Add to that the fact that one of the guys who was seemingly all over her suddenly decides to hook up with one of catty women who are also trying to run her out of the school? Nah. No thanks.
This series felt very pieced together and trying to adhere to a genre that the author may not be completely comfortable with or experienced in. I could be wrong but that was the general vibe. There wasn't enough balance between the good and the bad to make it seem like any of the men are redeemable or that the female protagonist is any different than her mother who was also being abused before her disappearance. I wanted to like the series, and I gave it the best I could but, I had to cut my losses. It wasn't for me. But, give it a read and see if you feel differently.
